Draft treatment analysis

As a class we had a look at everyones draft treatment and picked out the points that were good and ways in which we can improve our ideas for our music video. We gathered that many people really enjoyed the idea of a party scene and they liked this as it followed the typical pop conventions. From gaining other people's idea on how we can improve helped us to be able to change some ideas in which maybe they wouldn't enjoy as much.

We found that they enjoyed that narrative as it was quite fast and up beat which would entertain them however we saw that they didn't want it to seem as too much was going on so as a result we have made the beginning slightly shorter of the main girl getting ready so that it doesn't take up to much time in our music video.

Also from our responses we found that most people were against the use of alcohol, although we wasn't going to use alcohol due to our target audience and age range we are going to have a seen of some of the dancers going into the science lab preparing drinks to make them seem quite rebellious and that they are still in school so the drinks would not be alcoholic.